Naruto and Hinata

I will love you no matter what:

This is the third review I have done on Naruto. This story takes the characters out of their ninja world and puts them in a high school environment. Naruto finds a mysterious girl locked in the backroom of the High School. The girl is Hinata, She is locked in this room for being too much of a danger in the outside world. Naruto communicates with her by sliding a note under the door. Hinata responds and is the beginning of their love story.

The Author chose good subject matter and their fan fiction became popular. However, I find it hard to grasp who is talking when there is Dialogue. I often have to back track over the sentence again to understand it. The author could make this better by spelling out who is talking when it is not obvious.